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A new model of outlining(Excerpt from Chapter 6, Outlining Goes Electronic.) Everyone agrees structure is important, though few care to define what they mean by that. Somehow, we sense, the structure of a document indicates what the author imagines the audience may want to know first, second, and third, what may be most important to them, or less so, and what sequence of topics may be most meaningful to them. Structure allows fast access, or forestalls it; encourages people to move through the document with confidence, or discourages them from reading more. Structure can be inviting, or off-putting. Overall, the structure makes the material meaningful, memorable, and usable. So rhetoricians, composition teachers, and instructors of technical communication have all insisted that their students consider a series of different structures as they develop their material, switching topics around, deleting some, adding others, in order to settle on the most effective structure for a particular document, in a particular situation. The mechanism most commonly recommended for this important work is the outline. But, although these teachers and textbook authors rarely want to admit it, the medium of paper has made outlining difficult, tedious, and mechanical. And, without most people recognizing it, that medium has also shaped their conception of the times when one ought to outline, the product of that work, and the relationship between the outline and other documents, such as notes, drafts, and revisions. This nexus of ideas, I believe, limited the benefits writers got out of outlining. Hence, student and adult writers developed resentments, leading to resistance or downright refusal to do anything but the most trivial outlines. And, in response, the textbook authors have come up with a series of somewhat specious arguments in favor of creating a paper outline, based on its supposed logic, practicality, and malleability, as a writer moves toward a fuller vision of the material. But electronic outlining--creating an outline on the computer and working with it onscreen-- has now been widely available for almost twenty years. Noticed and used more by professional writers than by teachers or students, this tool allows us a new understanding of outlining, and, ultimately, of structure. In business and government, technical writing teams, overwhelmed by the volume of work to be done, have turned to many forms of electronic document creation and management, including the electronic outliner. Perhaps such software appeals more to us because we generally have to write several full-length books at once, under extremely tight deadlines, with changing information, and many partners at our side. |
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tools shape our shared experience Whenever a group encounters difficulty achieving its aims with one set of tools and media, it seems, some members may cast about for new tools, new media. But changes in tools and media often enable--or force--this group of pioneers to change the way they interact when they work together to create a document that reflects some mutual understanding. And when any technology--whether note cards, theme paper, or electronic outlining software--becomes widely available, it also becomes a visible symbol, or working metaphor, that all members of the community can use to extend their thinking about the way they build meaning together.
But new tools such as email, web sites, document management software, hypertext editors, word processing, and electronic outlining allow more people to work together more visibly, and because of that very visibility, these new tools can, with a little help, accelerate people's thinking about the social nature of the way we create meaning together. New tools often allow us to rethink familiar activities, because we can do some aspects of the activities somewhat more effectively, though differently. The change in perspective may also help us see more clearly the original purposes, and, with a little luck, discover new work we can accomplish, tasks we may never have imagined before. But at the same time that new tools and media are adopted by one part of the discourse community as described by Bizzell (1982), Faigley (1985), and Porter, (1986), another group usually remains unconvinced, devoted to earlier media, and, even if they must use some of the new technology, they continue to use concepts developed from the activities and artifacts of the earlier medium. With some textbooks, I believe, we see the authors in that odd situation, using word processing to produce the books, but still thinking with concepts that reflect paper, as a medium. For instance, many of the authors think in terms of a series of stages, and discrete documents, such as notes, outline, first draft, final draft, whereas electronically, a single file may contain an outline view, notes that are hidden or revealed, as necessary, and a word processing view of the full text. The school model of outlining represents a kind of cultural lock-in (Arthur, 1990, 1996), leading even open-minded experimenters with hypertext or the World Wide Web to hesitate before returning to that scene of teenage resentments, the outline. Here, we have looked at outlining critically, and gradually discerned two models of outlining, based on the medium in which one works--paper or electrons. Let me summarize the differences in tabular form, then draw out the implications, as I see them. In the table, I contrast the way the two models conceptualize attributes of the outline itself, and the process of outlining.
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